Clustered– In the morning dreams lieGarbled– the sleep of morning; Dappled– the rays of sunlight; Secret– the truth of emotions; Soothing– the silence of mind; Elusive– the pain of reality; United– the fragments of life; Numb– the Monotony of present; Deceiving– the comfort of guise;
Rising– on the cozy morning wishingI hug– the sleep of morning; I bask– in the rays of sunlight; I understand– the truth of emotions; I behold– the silence of mind; I kiss– the pain of reality; I enjoy– each fragment of life; I confront– the monotony of present; I maintain– the comfort of guise;
–Rohit

Nice thoughts, and nicely put.
Except they can use a bit of grammar check.
You may want to end each of your phrase endings with “;” and use ‘the’ to begin phrases like “the sleep of morning”, “the pain of reality”, etc.
In your category cloud, the spelling of psychology is incorrect.
cheers,
@mit
Comment by Amit — March 30, 2009 @ 3:47 pm
Brilliant!
“Rising-..” could have been shown from a third person perspective, but then again , its a choice of writer.
Anyways, great piece.
Comment by Nikhil — March 30, 2009 @ 4:23 pm