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March 30, 2009

Awakening

Filed under: Poems, Thoughts — Tags: , , , , — Rohit @ 2:44 pm
Clustered–
In the morning dreams
lie
Garbled–
the sleep of morning;
Dappled–
the rays of sunlight;
Secret–
the truth of emotions;
Soothing–
the silence of mind;
Elusive–
the pain of reality;
United–
the fragments of life;
Numb–
the Monotony of present;
Deceiving–
the comfort of guise;
Rising–
on the cozy morning
wishing
I hug–
the sleep of morning;
I bask–
in the rays of sunlight;
I understand–
the truth of emotions;
I behold–
the silence of mind;
I kiss–
the pain of reality;
I enjoy–
each fragment of life;
I confront–
the monotony of present;
I maintain–
the comfort of guise;

–Rohit

2 Comments »

  1. Nice thoughts, and nicely put. :)

    Except they can use a bit of grammar check.
    You may want to end each of your phrase endings with “;” and use ‘the’ to begin phrases like “the sleep of morning”, “the pain of reality”, etc.

    In your category cloud, the spelling of psychology is incorrect. :)

    cheers,
    @mit

    Comment by Amit — March 30, 2009 @ 3:47 pm

  2. Brilliant!

    “Rising-..” could have been shown from a third person perspective, but then again , its a choice of writer.

    Anyways, great piece.

    Comment by Nikhil — March 30, 2009 @ 4:23 pm


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