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February 6, 2009

Lines written on Valentine’s day

Filed under: Love, Poems, Relationships, Thoughts — Tags: , , , , , — Rohit @ 10:33 pm
Oh my dear ugly pig,
where did you get this strength?
to wander in the filthy shit,
in arms of a lovely friend.
This young man the one in love,
does envy your little chick.
for he also loves the romance,
but fears the policeman’s stick.
Hey you dog, pissing on the pole
look how lovely is your bitch
and I wonder you fear no body
to spend a night in a ditch.
This young man the one in love
would love to ape your work.
for you don’t worry the fluky puppies,
but they make him go berserk.
Hello dear pigeons, here you are,
kissing on the public bench.
are you drunken, or indifferent
undaunted of the social wrench.
This young man the one in love,
once tried to play your game
Now he lies with a soring butt
living as a mark of shame.
And I wonder this message of love,
Is what the natures plan.
Have I not reason to lament,
what man has made of man?

–Rohit

12 Comments »

  1. Great effort Rohit…Liked the humour in it.
    Still some place for improvement but good job…

    Comment by Ruchi — February 6, 2009 @ 10:43 pm

  2. Good observation put in words in an excellent manner!
    Well done!

    Comment by Ayush — February 6, 2009 @ 10:45 pm

  3. good work……..

    mosquito was better thought of mind..

    still a good humor

    Comment by shalini — February 6, 2009 @ 10:57 pm

  4. hey good effort…. u hav good taste of sarcasm…

    Comment by nitika — February 6, 2009 @ 11:46 pm

  5. vasie… ye sab tumko kaise pata chala …. ;)

    Comment by Diwa — February 6, 2009 @ 11:54 pm

  6. @comment #6
    Itni Jaldi Bhool gaya, tere liye Iodex main hi to laya tha :P

    Comment by Rohit — February 7, 2009 @ 9:46 am

  7. Nice , good blend!

    Comment by saturdaysun — February 7, 2009 @ 1:31 pm

  8. Great imagination again!!! I loved the tongue in cheek part….

    However, I do expect a nice poem depicting love till valentine day.

    Comment by Divij — February 7, 2009 @ 2:09 pm

  9. @comment #9

    Not specifically for valentines day, but there definitely exists one for love.. Here it is http://rohitgupta14.wordpress.com/2008/12/09/the-beginning/

    Comment by Rohit — February 7, 2009 @ 2:43 pm

  10. Well done! Nice composition,
    Ram Sene ppl should take a lesson from it.

    Comment by Deepak — February 9, 2009 @ 12:08 pm

  11. Man…u rock…!!
    Da last couplet reminds me f wordswoth’s poem f lamenting,vt man has made of man…!!
    Hope u remember as vl.! Keep it up

    Comment by Ramakant Chauhan — February 9, 2009 @ 10:27 pm


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